The White Kudu by Gisela Hoyle

 When you were a kid – you thought that one of the marks of growing up is that you won’t fall anymore: grownups didn’t have scabby knees or scraped arms; grownups were allowed to carry the tea-tray out to the garden, because they could be trusted not to drop things. Grownups didn’t fall anymore – so that is how you’d know you’d made it: absence of falling. At least I thought so.

Later you discover that adults still fall, quite a lot actually – and they grow up a lot later than you think as a child. Really grow up – that is take responsibility for their lives.

The characters of The White Kudu all definitely fall – they fall in love, they fall into holes in the ground (not quite like Alice); they fall in and out of stories – and they certainly fall from grace. They’re a flawed bunch, in other words, but I hope real enough: two English geologists who stumble into the stories and the lives of the people in a fairly remote desert town; the farmers, the mine managers; the town gossip; the over-protected, and at least partially therefore curiously vulnerable, women of such a town. And then the small town prophet who would be ever so surprised to hear himself called that; a child who is an elective mute; a skeleton, who changes everything and an archeologist, who finds buried halfway across the world her own history. They are by no means all likeable, in fact some of them will hopefully make readers’ blood boil; others I hope will be liked, some perhaps even loved. I miss them now I am no longer writing them.       

I have written a great deal about the setting and the ‘themes’ of the novel, but not very much about the characters. They are much harder to write about in this very much more analytical way – for the author at least. I cannot tell you how I created them – they kind of emerged from too much coffee, far too many games of solitaire and too little sleep.  They were a fairly recalcitrant bunch to write about in the first place. Always convinced they knew better what would happen next and always ready to put me straight if I got it wrong. I would have liked a little more respect, really, considering that they were my creations.

However they taught me important things in the process of testing me to the limit. They taught me about stories and characters and how they develop a life of their own and a logic, which one cannot go against. So they told me their stories, as they met and spoke to one another and came to this place, where so much was at stake and encountered the story of the white kudu. Their response to it became in turn my test for them; those who did not cope with it were thrown out – or sent to the back of the class.

 

Gisela 

 

6 Responses to “The White Kudu by Gisela Hoyle”

  1. Caroline Bailey Says:

    I like your concept of the characters taking a life of their own and escaping from the writer, their creator. Whereby the writer does not have full control over their lifes but has to follow what the personality of the character would do in a given situation. I never thought about this before. Interesting! Looking forward to “The White Kudu”!

  2. Gisela Hoyle Says:

    Dear Caroline

    Well it was a bit like that. They were very independent creature. And if I am totally honest, I probably wouldn’t want them any other way! Thanks for your patient reading!

  3. Andrew Says:

    Hi Gisela
    I’ve been enjoying your blog and its mix of family history, poetry, mythology, comments on place, and also your characters – who I’m looking forward to hating and loving! Using your characters’ responses to a story is an ingenious device to bring out their attitudes and prejudices.
    Andrew

  4. Gisela Hoyle Says:

    Thanks, Andrew

    Narrative device sounds much better than ‘my characters are rude bunch’ – I have enjoyed blogging, actually.

  5. Cathy Tuson Says:

    Hi Gisele
    Like your blog-I think you should do a regular one!

  6. Christoph Says:

    Im sure your book will do wonderfully well. It seems as though you’ve put so much effort in to the sowing of the seed that a decent harvest is inevitable.
    Becky told me of your book so i thought id find it. We got in to quite a convosation, be it one sided however. The familiar rambles of hubris, flawed heros and grandfather Aristotle. From reading this blog i can see exactly what she was talking of; holes and falling. I’ve now came to the conclusion that this has to be so, its human and its normal. A book without this would be far to surreal and even Sci-Fi, and i dont read Sci-Fi :)
    Any way good luck, hopefully speak soon
    blessed be

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